Right, a good effort but you show me what other music magazine looks anything like yours? It's all over the place I'm sorry! I thought you would have had more constructive feedback over this by now but this has no structure to it and looks like content has been thrown on it.
The background colour looks like I would find it in a magazine about the best new printer available in a magazine entitled "printer fanatics weekly" it's very technological and with no colour scheme that has ever been linked to music ever...ever!
Your images are a good idea but need to be moved around to be more prominent. I also know for sure that you didn't take them all yourself as you're in it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS NOT ALLOWED!!!!!!!!! Listen to what I have repeatedly said, YOU HAVE TO TAKE YOUR OWN IMAGES! I DO NOT WANT TO SEE ANY SCHOOL UNIFORM!
You have until 4th April for all pages to be completed so I need you to utilise the time on a Wednesday after school to make sure that you do this otherwise you will run out of time. You do art, bring some artistic element to your work please! I apologise if this is the first feedback you've had but I had assumed that this had been done. I am being harsh because I want you to do well! It's not going to get you your target grade, you've seen what gets a B, use that as inspiration!
Right, a good effort but you show me what other music magazine looks anything like yours? It's all over the place I'm sorry! I thought you would have had more constructive feedback over this by now but this has no structure to it and looks like content has been thrown on it.
ReplyDeleteThe background colour looks like I would find it in a magazine about the best new printer available in a magazine entitled "printer fanatics weekly" it's very technological and with no colour scheme that has ever been linked to music ever...ever!
Your images are a good idea but need to be moved around to be more prominent. I also know for sure that you didn't take them all yourself as you're in it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS NOT ALLOWED!!!!!!!!! Listen to what I have repeatedly said, YOU HAVE TO TAKE YOUR OWN IMAGES! I DO NOT WANT TO SEE ANY SCHOOL UNIFORM!
You have until 4th April for all pages to be completed so I need you to utilise the time on a Wednesday after school to make sure that you do this otherwise you will run out of time. You do art, bring some artistic element to your work please! I apologise if this is the first feedback you've had but I had assumed that this had been done. I am being harsh because I want you to do well! It's not going to get you your target grade, you've seen what gets a B, use that as inspiration!